Sunday, 24 August 2025

Tanka Poetry – Nicole Mahl (FSFA Committee member)

Tanka poetry is an art form of communication. It’s a short, free verse 31 syllable poem. When written in Japanese calligraphy, it is usually written in one long line however, when written in English, it is composed of 5 lines, with the following syllables per line in the poem - (5-7-5-7-7). It emphasizes clarity and conciseness, requiring the writer (poet), to choose each word carefully to convey meaning. The aim is to stir within you and the reader feelings, cherished memories, expressions, gratitude or vivid imagery and reflection, about a topic that is emotionally significant; to experience what the writer has felt.

The poem topic can be about experiencing a new culture, feelings about different seasons, social issues, childhood memories, romantic love. It can also be used as a concise story telling experience. 

It originated in Japan during the 9th century during the Heian (平安), known as the peace period - the golden era 794 - 1185, when the national culture of Japan grew and flourished, especially in the Japanese Imperial Court. It was a time noted for its art, etiquette, fashion, poetry and literature. This period ended as the rivalling warlords assumed power and control of government, transforming Japan into a shogunate. However, much of the Heian culture lived on and defines Japan even now.

Tanka can be used as a mindfulness activity, to help you slow down and be present, or to help you to connect with others e.g. parents can sit down with family and friends, to play with writing their own Tanka poem together, brainstorming ideas and presenting aloud your poems. You may then follow up with drawing or painting pictures or making a collage together. Each family member working together as a team. 

When writing tanka poems in Japanese calligraphy, different meanings can emerge. (Note: The syllables also translate differently and may not fit the format exactly, when changed into another language).

When reciting a tanka poem aloud, it can invoke from deep within you, the dormant performer. You may then notice how you articulate your words, and listen to your own your voice tone and pitch. Is it polite or brash? Do you articulate the words clearly? Have you now found a new fun 10-minute activity that can help you improve your public speaking skills? Writing Tanka poetry connects you to your heart and spirit.

Our FSFA Japanese Festival held in August 2025, provided an opportunity to engage and experience Tanka  poetry with the Melbourne Tanka Group led by Dr Kelly Shang and her colleagues. They meet regularly to play with Tanka poetry writing and expression, outside their busy workplaces and family life. Tanka is an opportunity to reconnect with your inner true self, and connect with others, who may feel at times, suppressed, caged, or inspired by their occupational roles, relationships, culture or home life.

Our challenge to you, is to choose a topic of choice e.g. winter, love, happiness, a person to describe or a job title, etc. and explore the fun of writing your own tanka poem. Alternatively, you could rewrite the following poem in your own words sounding out the syllables for each line (5 lines only) 5-7-5-7-7.

My poem, about Japan is as follows:

5 (syllables)   Japan is busy

7                      Polite, organized, patient

5                      Slow down and observe

7                      Embrace this culture in life

7                      Feel the blossoming emerge

 

My mother, an avid reader who attended the Japanese Festival, wrote this tanka poem about spring, in only a few minutes. 

Spring 

Buds are sprouting up

Blossoms blooming everywhere

Daffodils swaying

Colours exploding right now

Bringing life and energy 

    

Melbourne Tanka Poetry Club also wrote the following poem to celebrate our Japanese Festival day. It’s written in Japanese calligraphy and translated into English, hence the syllables are different.